1Q84 is a lot of fun – isn’t that enough?
Not, apparently, for Scott Esposito. His review demolishes the novel. He calls the characters “cardboard cutouts,” mocks the prose as leaden and cliched, and argues that Murakami hasn’t said anything new in years. All failings for any novel, to be sure, but ones that grate particularly on Scott’s nerves, because 1Q84, in his view, is so “ambitious,” meaning he and others want so much from it.
What is an “ambitious” work of fiction, anyway? I see this term used all the time, and I’m never sure. Here, I presume Scott just means “long.” Certainly Murakami isn’t trying, as he’s done in the past, to offer some new way to understand Japan’s World War II atrocities, or help anyone understand any other “big issue.” He’s doing what he’s said in interviews he meant to do: tell the story of two people who fall in love, are separated, then spend their lives searching for one another. That’s the backbone of 1Q84, and finding out what happens to them is the main reason I’ve kept reading for the 400 or so pages I’ve read so far. And I’ve done so eagerly – much more eagerly than I read After dark or Kafka on the shore, two recent Murakami works that I, like Scott, found dull.
Is it enough for a book to be highly readable – for the plot to carry it along, and make the pages fly by? Not for Scott, and I wonder if he’s fallen into the trap of equating a book’s importance with the importance, or at least the current-events-peggedness, of what the author is writing about. I hate when critics do that. Neither do I care much for books in which the author tries to make his book succeed, by writing from the headlines, and to his readers’ feelings about them. Jonathan Safran Foer’s Everything is Illuminated, for example, is for me a despicably condescending book that says no more than “Hey! I’m a young’un writing about The Collapse of Communism and THE HOLOCAUST! Look at me!” Murakami’s never done anything like that, thank God. But I wonder if Scott wants this, or at least wants the
Of course the fun might just not there for Scott. I can understand that. There’s no accounting for taste in fun. I can understand too if Scott’s problem is that he’s had enough of Murakami’s prose. (I don’t read Japanese, but I’ll take Murakami, a fluent English speaker, at his word when he says Jay Rubin’s English is entirely faithful to the style and feel of the original.) Calling it clunky is charitable. Murakami seems to love cliches, too, or expressions so artless they should be cliches – witness the repeated references, in 1Q84 to “the gears of the world clicking forward,” and the greeting-card reminders that “once one of the world’s gears clicks forward, it can’t be clicked back.”*
And yet… Murakami’s artlessness is an artifice, I think. Or at least it works as one. And it’s a good one. It disarms. Much of his fiction – heck, all of his fiction – only works if you read it as coming from someone with the mind and worldview of a precocious teenager. But not the Jonathan Safran Foer type, who uses words to show off – rather, the type whose thoughts far outstrip his ability to put them into words. And who doesn’t care to push on that score, because communicating with others, and gaining their respect, are way down low on the personal priority list. For me, Murakami’s prose works very well, as a device for getting his readers to identify with this way of thinking, and understand the value of the inward, contemplative life of which it seems, for him, to be an essential part.
What about the characters? Are they “cardboard cutouts”? Well, one man’s cardboard cutouts are another man’s Rhett and Scarlett. Tengo and Aomame lead lives in which contemplation plays a central role – and as a result, they relate poorly to others, and do so as infrequently as they can manage. Does this make them lifeless? Not to me. I find them and their stories compelling. Sure, there’s all the usual Murakami stuff: distant and overly stern parents, a cult here, a failure to seize love there, and everywhere, missed connections that at once screw up lives and make them meaningful. There are odd-shaped ears and pubescent breasts. O.k.. But there are no boys in wells! At least not in the first 400 pages.
And the plot? What’s to say? A boy and girl meet, fall in love, long for years to get together, then set to searching for one another. There’s some stuff about living in an alternate universe, a bisexual policewoman… But as Murakami has said, it’s a simple story. And one that’s a lot of fun to read. Maybe he “doesn’t have anything to say.” But so much of what “has something to say” is bullshit. More Murakami, I say, and less Jonathan Safran Foer, and the world would be a better place.
* – I’m paraphrasing here. The exact wording may be different. The cliches are so bad, I’m not going to bother looking them up, because that would mean I’d have to read them again.

